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Come, friend, and walk with me
Let’s go watch the things we’ll someday fix
Let’s ride till the city line
That someday we’ll cross
There’s a horizon there
We’ll somehow reach

It hurts, we know now
Much more than we ever thought
And it surprises us on the dawn
That the enemy blood in our hands
Pains us much more than our own
That’s flowing from our wounded dream.

Let’s ride, beyond
Where no one dares to cross
Let’s stand the glares
The strong revolts
To reach the line we once dreamed of
Pay no attention to the boys we leave behind.

It cries, I know, the wounded pride
It crawls to hide in shame
To know the me that was so mine
Can now become a raging beast
which covets the dream so much
That hurts the human in me

Let’s walk , my friend, let’s walk and see
The things we cannot fix
The line we saw and dreamed of
Is mocking us with cold disdain
Go back and let the world pay
For the dream reality stole away

It’s sad, I know, when I turn around
And realice your steps have died
You stare at me with regretful eyes
And tell me you wish you could stand
I kiss your head and feel you fade
From the place you’ve always had

It’s soon we know the walk has stopped
Long ago, and we wonder if it even started
The things that cling to me, I let them go
And I do not look back.
There’s a goal, you say, when we meet again
In these ethernal fields, that we can reach.
:iconmaxwell-kiddo:

Author's Comments

I definitely DO NOT claim to be good with words. In fact, this thing prolly sucks very much. I'm impatient, and I refuse to think which world to place strategically where, which doesn't make me a great poet. I'll prolly keep refusing to think when I write, because that's just who I am. But who knows? Maybe I can change ^^

Anyway, for those who know my freaking obsesions might realize who is talking here in this... thing? Or maybe not -_-

Dedicated to :iconscarletwave: cause she is great with words, and even tho this one is a bit sad because history was just like that, let me be clear about this: It doesn't have to end like that.

You're a walker my friend. Please do walk on and on in both life and death.

Love ya all.

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:iconwolf-gang:
Adding to favs doesn't even measure up to what this piece deserves.

This is truly beautiful, and I am so proud that you did such a thing. Really Chu..

Words cannot describe.

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keep the :peace:

:hexentanz:
:iconscarletwave:
How do I ever find the proper words to convey how this has stricken me?? Just...Chu, thank you. For so, so many things. All these years of honesty and support and always being there and never expecting a thing and and and....


I just love you, Mercedes...so very much. This means everything to me.


All the love in my heart~

Jenny

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It's that terrifying place where loneliness itself will make her forget how to smile...
:iconfalling-rain-suffers:
It's beautiful :D I love it! Want to give me another hint? You are wonderful with words and a great poet, it was amazing. :iconbigheartplz: Oh question for you, can I call you Maxi(Maxy?) since I don't really know your real name and don't know if you want me to call you by your real name?

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I LOVE good sports anime like Prince of Tennis, Eyeshield 21, Ookiku Furikabutte:heart:and Whistle!Anyone else know of anymore good sports anime?
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I am an UKE! And my element is WATER! Oh yeah I AM AWESOME!!
:iconmaxwell-kiddo:
And I seriously got no words to describe the surprise!!! But I'm really honoured that you think so highly of this, darling, and of myself. So thank you, for the constant vote of confidence and support in what I do ^____^

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An ethical sympathy in an artist is an unpardonable mannerism of style. No artist is ever morbid. The artist can express everything. O.W.

:butterflytwo: Butterfly Effect Movement :butterflytwo: [link]
:iconmaxwell-kiddo:
And you are very very welcome, hun. You deserve anything I can get you. I'm really really honoured and happy that you feel this way TT____TT

Love youuuuu

--
An ethical sympathy in an artist is an unpardonable mannerism of style. No artist is ever morbid. The artist can express everything. O.W.

:butterflytwo: Butterfly Effect Movement :butterflytwo: [link]
:iconmaxwell-kiddo:
Thank you darling! Lol no need to hint, I can just tell you. It is mostly based on the story of Alexander The Great and his friendship with Hephaestion, his most trusted friend and one of his generals.

Sure thing! You can call me as you wish ^__^ My real name is Mercedes, and some people call me Chu, so pick the one you like most, I don't mind ^___^

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An ethical sympathy in an artist is an unpardonable mannerism of style. No artist is ever morbid. The artist can express everything. O.W.

:butterflytwo: Butterfly Effect Movement :butterflytwo: [link]
:iconscarletwave:
And I you, my beloved friend.


:nod:

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It's that terrifying place where loneliness itself will make her forget how to smile...
:iconfalling-rain-suffers:
Oh :heart: :D
Okay will do, Your name shortened could almost spell Mercy you know? :D

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I LOVE good sports anime like Prince of Tennis, Eyeshield 21, Ookiku Furikabutte:heart:and Whistle!Anyone else know of anymore good sports anime?
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I am an UKE! And my element is WATER! Oh yeah I AM AWESOME!!
:iconmaxwell-kiddo:
Haha yeah XDD it's supposed to mean that, actually.

--
An ethical sympathy in an artist is an unpardonable mannerism of style. No artist is ever morbid. The artist can express everything. O.W.

:butterflytwo: Butterfly Effect Movement :butterflytwo: [link]

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